Bitterness!

Bitterness!

Postby ciderman_nz » Thu May 19, 2005 9:50 am

Bitterness

Bitterness is a chipped cup.
Worthless, unwanted.
Grime encrusted. Cracked,
The pattern faded,
Stained by sour dregs.

I’ll have none of it!
I’ll smash it!
Grind beneath my feet
The powdered fragments.

I shall not leave it
For my heirs.
Let them bake a better clay
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Postby Shutterfrog » Thu May 19, 2005 12:55 pm

I hope that is your writing, Ciderman. :) I like it, I do.
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Postby Rowan » Thu May 19, 2005 5:32 pm

Love it Ciderman.
Avoid the evil, and it will avoid thee.
Gaelic Proverb

Ad eundum quo nemo ante iit.
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Postby dejavou » Thu May 19, 2005 7:03 pm

Very profound Ciderman
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Postby ciderman_nz » Thu May 19, 2005 8:17 pm

'Tis me! I'm ever so profound. I sometimes fall asleep being profound! :)
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Postby dejavou » Thu May 19, 2005 8:43 pm

Well profound can be very tiring :roll:
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